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篇一:英语作文 家乡的变化 中英翻译

Changes in My Hometown

My hometown Gaochun is an old and beautiful city. It used to be quiet place. There were green hills, fresh air and many old houses. However, the area has changed a lot over the years. Now there are many new squares, new roads and a lot of tall buildings.


In the past, people could only go to there by bicycle or on foot. Many buses pass there now, people can take the taxi, car, bus, underground or light rail to Gaochun, and it is faster and easier to get there. The environment has also changed, too. The water is clearer, the tree is greener, and the air is fresher. We are happy to live in the beautiful city.


篇二:家乡的变化 英语作文3篇

great changes in my hometown

Great Changes in My Hometown

I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There was no tall

building and the only street was narrow. Just outside the town, there was a river. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People here lived a simple life.

Great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings, big department stores and factories everywhere. Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets. But with the development of the industry, we have fewer trees. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.

Changes in My Hometown

I am very happy for my hometown.Because my hometown are becoming more and more beautiful.

In the past,many people were poor.Even through,they couldn't get enough food.People have lived in a low house.They had no money to buy farm

machines,so they plant crops with the help of farm animals.Children study in an old school.

But now,with the development of China,the living conditions have improved a lot.People live in a tall building and they plant crops with the help of farm machines.And children in a modern school.

I believe my hometown will become more beautiful.

My home in Zhouzhi County, in recent years has undergone a drastic change. Take my family for instance. Previously, we do not have a computer at home. Dad was the engineer. Before Dad hands painting drawing, painting with the rulers, not used correctly attached. Black will be careful not to rub the drawing, painting slowly, and had to keep cutting pencil. The lines do not paint beautiful. Spend one or two days drawings drawings. Also drawings, and printing of plans to eventually create engineering drawings. A total needs three days. Now, I bought a home computer. He can use a computer drawing, no trace; Just one little click of the mouse to point, Instead of doing everything we can. A picture works better if some time. An unfinished print of a direct, clear and beautiful. With computer. I have an article on a computer to help their mother. I also used folders, saved a cartoon, diaries, essays and other. I also use it as literature. I also use it to learn English, the software installed, use it to fight game : : Mama system testing, fighting words. I brought a lot of convenience to the home computer. This summer, Tim, we also have a refrigerator. Before, during the summer, often a bad thing, a bad throw on the more unfortunate. Now refrigerators can be frozen foods, no bad foods freezer. I can give it to produce ice. I makeup back, I let my thirst ice on a frozen. DIABLO convenience of a refrigerator to me. Last year, we also have to buy an air conditioner. Previously, in the winter without air conditioning, get up clothes, I always behind the blanket. Now, with air-conditioning, and the cold would not dressed up. No

air-conditioning in the summer, heat can help people attain the doldrums, not activities. Now, with air conditioning in the summer, no matter what time, as long as a use of air conditioners, and water wind, he feels very cool. in a cool place like the same forest. Recently, our county appeared to the Internet, most of the computers on the home network Inter. Previously, no Internet, or something happens you just want to submit an email composition can vote on upswing the letter sent out. We have to bring the convenience of the Internet. ! We really big changes in home!

篇三:家乡的变化 高中英语作文

考查提纲类作文的写作。话题是家乡的变化,要点是以表格形式表示的,结构很清晰,分三部分,一部分是过去情况,一部分是现在情况,第三部分是将来展望,可以适当增加细节,不能只是把要点翻译成英语、,注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思,可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。范文中的复杂句不对但使用了一些短语:In the past ,take place ,live a better life另外还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点,使文章成为一个整体。如In the past ,Now等



Changes in My Hometown

My home town is in the center of Xuzhou which was a quiet and beautiful place. In the past, there were many animals. They were lovely and nice. The air was fresh and there were many birds fly in the sky.


Over the past years, it has changed a lot. At the present, it becomes a modern town and

develops a lot. Now, the people in Xuzhou are richer than before, so most of people go to work by bus or by underground. Sometimes, they also drive their private cars to work. Many people sell out their old houses and move into new flats.


In some ways, the development has brought some good things, but it has also causes much environment pollution. I think we should take action to reduce the pollution.





(1) 家乡的地理位置;

(2) 解放前的情况;

(3) 解放后的变化;

(4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

篇六:中考英语满分作文——我的家乡My Home Town

中考英语满分作文——我的家乡My Home Town


(1) 家乡的地理位置;

(2) 解放前的情况;

(3) 解放后的变化;

(4) 对家乡的感情。


My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.


How to be a good learner?

As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I think all these above will be helpful to us.

亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study”为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。


【优秀满分范文】My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

3父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。提示:1.如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西,如领带等:2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。【优秀满分范文】

Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts. If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.

No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?

4请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。提示:

1.春节是中国最重要的节日;2.人们大多回家过年,家庭成员团聚;3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);4.孩子们喜欢春节。

【优秀满分范文】The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China. People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives. Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.


Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years. She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite. I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.

6背景设定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件,想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏,请根据以下提示,给Miachael回一封电子邮件。 过去 生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系不便...... 现在 生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住得舒适,手机普及......


3.词数80词左右,开头语以给出(不计入词数)。参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯),telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy【优秀满分范文】

Dear Michael,

You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.In the past, the living conditions were very poor.

There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.Thanks to the government, our

hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.


Kang Min


优点 1. 足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累。

2. 价格通常比较便宜。

3. 可供选择的范围广,品种多。

缺点 1. 只能看到图片,看不到商品本身。

2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。


2.80词左右,开头文章已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause【优秀满分范文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the

Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.

8假如你是李华,今年上初三了,现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数:60-80。【优秀满分范文】 I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks. I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time

studying. I really miss my old days.

9某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good

relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。要点:1.父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;2.你对这些问题的看法;3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。【优秀满分范文 How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.

10今天是母亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下:1. 表述你与母亲间的情感;2(转载自:www.ZUOwenZhoukAn.com 作文周 刊:初中英语作文家乡的变化). 为母亲制作一张卡片;3. 帮助母亲做点事;4. 陪母亲散步等。注意:1.词数80左右;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。【优秀满分范文】

Dear John,

It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?

I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.

Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.

What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours, Li Hua 11英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷,成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表分析它会时谁的。要求:1.设想当时的情景,适当扩展细节;2.书写工整,100词左右。参考词汇:top student优等生;handwriting笔迹;full marks满分【优秀满分范文】

we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.

Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.



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many musicians who can write their own

lyrics cool

most music that they can dance to full of energy



1、 为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率,《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good



3、亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study”为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。



4、父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。 提示:1.如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西,如领带等:

2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。

5、请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。



3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);













参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯),telegram, thanks

to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy




参考词汇:网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause






参考词汇:electronic adj.电子的

11、某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。





1. 表述你与母亲间的情感;

2. 为母亲制作一张卡片;

3. 帮助母亲做点事;

4. 陪母亲散步等。







参考词汇:top student优等生 handwriting笔迹




2.礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸(wrapping paper);




16、刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客,因此John 向Bob请教相关礼仪。假设你是Bob,请你给John回一封电子邮件,告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右,开头已给出(不计入总词数)。



1. 邻桌年轻人大声说话、吸烟。

2. 你请他们不要那样做。

3. 他们不听,反而嘲笑你。

4. 你认为:①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。


参考词汇:嘲笑laugh at


1. 词数80左右,短文开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

2. 要点齐全,行为连贯,可适当发挥。





19、近20年来,各方面的调查表明:青少年的体质不断下降。请你以“How to keep healty”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,说说你的看法和建议。开头已给出,不计入总词数。 主要内容包括:

1. 体质下降的原因。如:eat too much junk food, have too much homework...

2. 合理的健康建议。如:should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(饮食平衡), enough


20、节约资源,保护环境,从身边的小事做起。作为一名学生,我们应该怎样看待“低碳”生活?请以“My low — carbon life”为题写一篇短文,简述自己对“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80词左右。






参考词汇:on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap



1、假如你叫李华,请你就“英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学”这一问题,根据下面的提示和要求,给你的老师Miss Li写一封信,谈一谈你的看法。提示:(1)What’s your idea?

(2)Why do you think so?(3)What is your advice?

Dear Miss Li,

I think you'd better use English in class. When you speak English, we'll have a good chance to improve our listening kills. It is also helpful for our reading, speaking and writing. We can copy what you say all the time. The more chances we have, the more progress we will make! So I hope you can teach in English. But please use simple English as much as possible and speak clearly and slowly. This way, we can learn English better and better.

I Hope you can think about it.

Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua Dear Miss Li,

I think you'd better use both English and Chinese. The best way to learn English is to use it. When you teach in English, it's good for our listening. At the same time it is helpful to improve our speaking, reading and writing .However, if you only use English, we can't follow you sometimes, especially when you explain grammar rules and language points. So my advice is “Use English when possible and use Chinese when necessary”. This way, we can learn English better.

Hopefully you can think about it.

Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua


日记必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可以增减适当情节,使其通顺、连贯。 参考词汇:pocket money 零花钱,vase 花瓶,overwork 过度劳累,be moved to tears 感动得流泪

11th May,Sunday Rainy

Today is Mother's Day. I love mother so much that I've done many things 1

for her.

In the morning I bought some flowers with my pocket money and put them in the vase. In the afternoon I,I went to the market and bought vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave my mother the card that I made myself and said “Happy Mother's Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some housework from today on.

Hearing the words, mother was moved to tears.

Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.







thMay 6,2014

Dear Tony,

I’m very glad to hear that you’ll stay at my house when you come to Xi’an this summer holiday. Now I’d like to tell you how to get to my house.

I live at No. 68 Xiling Avenue, Xi’an. When you arrive in Xi’an by train, you can take a No. 10 bus and get off at the History Museum. Anyway, you can also take a No. 15 bus to the same museum if you get off a plane or take a taxi to reach my home directly. Call me as soon as you get to our city so that I’ll meet you at the museum if you take a bus.

Hope you’ll have a pleasant journey.


Wang Hong

4、以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为题用英语写一篇短文描述家乡小镇所发生的变化。

Great Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors come here.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars.

I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

5、请你根据以下要点提示写一篇题为Chinese Tea的短文,向外国朋友介绍中国的茶文化。


Chinese Tea

It is 4000 years since the Chinese began to grow and drink tea.

There’re many kinds of tea in China, of which Longjing Tea is famous all over the world.

Tea is usually drunk in tea sets. A tea set is made up of a tea pot and some teacups, which are both made of china.

Most Chinese like drinking tea. Tea is served not only at tea house and restaurants but also at home. People also drink tea during breaks at offices or factories.It has been discovered that drinking tea is good for people’s health. A cup of tea can make you relaxed and refreshed. And it’s said that green tea can prevent cancers.

That’s why tea is becoming more and more popular with people.

6、发明创造改变了世界,长大后你想当一名发明家吗?作为一名中学生你应该怎样做?请根据以下提示,以“How to Become an Inventor”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。



How to Become an Inventor

Becoming an inventor is many people’s dream. Would you like to be an inventor? As a student, we need to do these things.

We must study hard. Knowledge is the basis(基础). If you don’t master some knowledge, it’s impossible for you to invent anything. Interest is the best teacher. When we are interested in something, we will do it well, so we should have interest. Creativity is very important, too. We need to come up with new ideas.

Finally, we should keep on studying hard and never give up. Don’t be afraid to fail.


请以Teenagers Shouldn’t Be Allowed to Drive为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

Teenagers Shouldn’t Be Allowed to Drive

Now more and more families have their own cars. And the number of people who get their driver's licenses is also increasing. Even some students have got their driving licenses, too. I have nothing against driving, but I don’t think teenagers should be allowed to drive, because they aren’t serious enough at that age. They should spend more time on their studies and achieve their dreams. After they grow up, they will have a lot of chances to drive. So teenagers shouldn't be allowed to drive.

8、假设你家的宠物狗旺旺走失几天了,至今还未找到。你寻思着他可能正在寻找回家的路;可能被好心人送到警察局;也可能挣饿着肚子在街上游荡;还可能正在和其他的狗玩耍。你 3


My pet dog, Wangwang, has been missing for several days. Where can it go? It might be trying to find out the way home now. Or it might be sent to the police station by a kind person. Or maybe it is walking along the street with an empty stomach. And also it is possible that it is playing somewhere with other dogs.

We are all worried about it very much. We hope it can come back home early.


Can we listen to music when doing homework?

Life is boring without music. It’s good for us to listen to music properly. Well, is it good or bad for us to listen to music when doing homework? Here are some students’ answers.

Some students think listening to music can make them excited, relaxed and clear-minded, so they like to music as they do homework. But some students don’t think so. They think music affects their thinking. As a result, it just makes them feel more tired. It’s really a waste of time.

As for me, I like doing homework with music. Sometimes it can bring us some inspiration(灵感).

10、刚到中国学习不久的John应中国朋友邀请到家里做客,因此,他向你请教相关礼仪。假设你是李明,请你用英语给John写一封80词左右的电子邮件,告诉他一些注意事项。 Dear John,

I understand that you will visit your Chinese friend’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable. First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. It is also good to bring a small gift, such as some flowers or fruit. You will probably use chopsticks to eat dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating, and after dinner, saying thanks is also necessary. You are not supposed to stay long after dinner.

Good luck!

Yours, Li Ming 4

篇十:初中英语作文辅导Changes in my hometown2


My hometown

作者: 朱雪琴(凯里学院附中初三) My hometown—Yuqing, which is in the southeast of Zuiyi city, Guizhou Province, is a very beautiful town. Let me tell you my beautiful hometown.

My grandmother tells me:more than thirty years ago, my hometown was just a small and poor town, the poeple there didn't enough food or clothes,they led a hard life. But now, poeple have found a lot of ways of making money. People don't worry food or clothes any more. In the past, the people from village got into the street on foot. Now ,they can take buses or drive their own cars to go work. In old days, they lived in their old houses, now most of them have new houses and have color TV sets, cell phones, personal computers and so on. People's living condition have improved a lot. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past thirty years indeed. We can see tall buildings, factories, schools, hospitals and new roads everywhere.

I love my hometown. I must study hard to make it build more beautiful.



结尾段前后照应,提出希望,文章严谨,中心突出。 (龙老师评)

Changes in my hometown作者: 谢丽君 (附中初三)

Many changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. It used to be a beautiful small town. There was a river running around the hometown,we could see all kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. In my hometown we could also see many trees here and there, the air was very fresh. Good environment made us happy. However, with the development of the industry, lots of trees have been cut down. Now we can see tall buildings and factories everywhere. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious.

I love my hometown very much. We must do something useful to stop pollution and make our hometown even more beautiful.

点评:作者通过对家乡的变化,采用对比的手法,描写家乡过去是个环境优美的小镇,现在虽然是高楼林立、工厂遍布,但污染越来越严重,暗示人们重视。结尾一段紧扣主题,提出号召,控制污染,把家乡变得更加美丽。 本文多种时态与句式的运用,使得文章结构紧凑,自然。现在完成时 Many changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. “There be"句型的使用,被动语态运用 lots of trees have been cut down. 比较级的使用Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious等等。整篇文章写得较为成功,若能把家乡变化描写得详细些那更好了。